Alex Hatala
WRT 150
WRT 150
Mrs. Rinke
11/2/12
Reflection
Essay
When thinking about finding an advertisement and how I
would design in, I felt out of my comfort zone when keeping in mind all of the
guidelines that this paper had to have. Going into this assignment was
challenging because it was something that I've never had to do before. It was a
rather lengthy assignment with the use of rhetorical appeals that I wasn't confident in defining in my paper. I knew that this was going to be an essay
that I absolutely could not wait until the last minute to do so I made sure to
create an outline of everything that I had to include in it and got started
right away. As I began to write a few main points of what I was going to
include in my paper, I soon realized that this assignment wasn't as bad as I
originally intended it to be.
Finding
an advertisement was the easy part for me. I spent some time reading through
magazines and paying close attention to all of the advertisements until I came
across a David’s Bridal advertisement. I tried picking out the flaws that the
advertisement had and soon realized exactly how I was going to redesign it and
what angle I would take on it to get my main point across. I wasn't looking for
any advertisement in particular but I knew I wanted to find a simple one and
figure out what I wanted to do with it and write about it. I wanted to find an
advertisement geared towards teenagers and older women. I knew that I would
have a better chance to figure out what to write about and how I would redesign
it to appeal to a different audience.
When
it came time to think about how I wanted to redesign my advertisement, it was
easy for me to picture it in my mind. I picked a somewhat general topic of
talking about the body image of women in today’s society; the definition of
skinny and what everyone considers “fat”. My topic of discussion was also
something that I related to because I have my own opinions about how society
looks at women and men alike and knew that this topic would a good one to write
about. I thought about changing the general audience to appeal to men but since
my advertisement was geared towards tall, young, skinny models, it occurred to
me that it didn't give a good representation of the body size of all women in
society. It made me think about how many young teenage girls view that
advertisement in a negative light that makes them think badly about their body.
It’s important to make an advertisement that equally appeals to a diverse
audience which is what I decided to do in my essay.
As
I began writing my essay, I faced quite a few challenges. I struggled with
figuring out how I should start and end my essay and what I should incorporate
in my body paragraphs. I was looking forward to the peer review of our essays
in class so that I was able to find what I had missed while writing my rough
draft and what information I still needed to include. There were a lot of
things that needed to be talked about in this essay and I was mainly worried
about not including them in it. I was also mainly worried about the length
requirement because I felt like it was a stretch to even get to 5 pages.
Organization was another big thing that I had trouble with because I felt like
I had too much information that was scattered and not thought out very well. I
overcame these challenges by making sure to read over the guidelines multiple
times and write a paragraph that corresponded to each of the points. I took
everything that my partner told me that I needed to include in my paper as well
as helpful hints and applied it to my final draft which helped take some of the
stress off of my shoulders.
What
I liked most about this assignment was the fact that we got to pick an
advertisement of our choosing instead of having one picked for us. I also felt
like I learned a lot about the rhetorical appeals and how they are applied in
advertisements. I am one to never pay actual attention to advertisements when
flipping through a magazine. It was very interesting to find out that so much
thought actually goes into an advertisement and that they aren't just slipped
into magazines for no point at all. They capture ethos, logos, and pathos and
we aren't even aware of them because we’re either just glancing at them or only
focusing on the picture. I will use these likes to my advantage because I
actually take the time to look at everything that is on an advertisement
instead of reading right over it. It’s interesting to identify the general
audience of that advertisement and how they make people want to buy their product.
The
learning outcomes that I have walked away with were those of being able to
define rhetorical appeals and knowing how to look for them and how to
incorporate them in current and future essays as well. I only vaguely remember
learning these rhetorical appeals a few years ago and having to use them in a
paper helped commit them to memory more easily. Committing these appeals to
memory is important for me because I know I’m going to need them in the future
and continually writing papers with these appeals should help in strengthening
that. I also feel that I've learned how to be a better judge of character when
focusing on how advertisements appeal to a general audience even if I may not
agree with how they capture a wide range of people in today’s society. I feel
that I have a clear understanding now of how to look for ethos, logos, and
pathos in anything and knowing these appeals are good for a lot of things in
life.
If I were to get a second chance at writing this essay, I would spend more time figuring out the rhetorical appeals in my advertisement. I felt like I went out on a limb to try to think of how these appeals would be put into my essay and it was hard to find ethos, logos, and pathos in the original advertisement as well as in the redesign. I know that my explanations as to how these appeals were in both advertisements weren't well thought out and I know that’s going to bring down my overall grade on this essay. I would also make sure to spend more time brainstorming everything that I would include in my paper as well as actually writing my paper in regards to the deadlines. Finding a different advertisement would have also benefited me since I didn't spend a lot of time looking through magazines and picking out an advertisement that I could use to write this essay.
If I were to get a second chance at writing this essay, I would spend more time figuring out the rhetorical appeals in my advertisement. I felt like I went out on a limb to try to think of how these appeals would be put into my essay and it was hard to find ethos, logos, and pathos in the original advertisement as well as in the redesign. I know that my explanations as to how these appeals were in both advertisements weren't well thought out and I know that’s going to bring down my overall grade on this essay. I would also make sure to spend more time brainstorming everything that I would include in my paper as well as actually writing my paper in regards to the deadlines. Finding a different advertisement would have also benefited me since I didn't spend a lot of time looking through magazines and picking out an advertisement that I could use to write this essay.